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eyes iridescently gazing
at skies of milky ways
loneliness swallowed by
his warm hold enveloping
your body

light years between love
galaxies galaxies
disappearing into black holes
memories memories filling
the darkness in your soul

shooting stars, make a wish
we can always be together like this

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Feeling sort of infinite.
Like I'm light years away...
I love outer space, it's so frightening yet beautiful.

***Here's where I got the above picture from.. >>>>[link]<<<<
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~metaknightfreak7435 Jan 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
How do you post both the picture and the text? :)
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*caramelpot Jan 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
When you go into your Sta.sh, click on your Sta.sh Writer.
On the right side of the controls there is a chain Link. Click Link and there is a box where you would put the URL of the picture you want embedded in your poem. Hit OK and your picture should be in the text box area. :)
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~metaknightfreak7435 Jan 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I can't find the chain link :(
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~Zireael07 Jan 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is brilliant!
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Mood: Love *caramelpot Jan 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you!
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Mood: Joy ~tommyboywood Jan 14, 2013  Professional Writer
so cool! you might like my take on "Milky Way."
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*caramelpot Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh ho! I'll be sure to check it out. Thanks! :hug:
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~winterkate Jan 11, 2013  Student Writer
I'm going to be bluntly honest here, invoking the phrase 'milky ways' right before a line about warm bodies makes me think of cum. Other than that, I really love the galaxies galaxies line - the repetition worked perfectly.
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*caramelpot Jan 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Lmaoooo strange mind you have there lol. But thank you nonetheless. :hug:
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~winterkate Jan 15, 2013  Student Writer
You're really welcome! Haha, innuendo checks are always something I do, just cuz I'm a teen and other teens will pick up on anything and everything.
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